New Sig.

[Syed]

I didn't give it a name. It's in my sig. What do you guys think?
v1:

v2: my sig

 

[T R 1 B A L]

I like it, though the focal point is unclear/too crowded.

depth could be better, smudges slightly annoy me, but well done

 

[Syed]

I like it, though the focal point is unclear/too crowded.

depth could be better, smudges slightly annoy me, but well done

Means alot, thanks.

 

[Draucia]

I think that's your best sig yet!
Flow is pretty clear (btw, tr1bal: wud you mind posting on my other thread telling eppic wat flow is...), smudge isn't that good (or what ever the stuff is around his head), and effects are pretty nice .
8/10.

 

[|D|]

lose the smudging add some lightning and its a good.

Like draucia said its probably one of your best.

 

[Syed]

added v2

 

[Draucia]

added v2

Looks way better, but I don't like the lighting.
I don't know why, but whenever somebody adds a soft brush, and I can see the main point (the brightest part) good, I feel that it doesn't look natural.
It's prob just me, so gj .

 

[Jman17]

Good job on taking care of the smudge. That was ruining it in v1 but you cleaned it up.

The lighting should be a bit more transparent and blend more, yet still do the lighting job.

I like it, but I don't necessarily like the size.