I wanna see it with colors.

I'd reccomend only using B&W if your renders, stocks, and C4Ds are all different colors, but then again there's always masks.
Anywho, I like the one with text better, which is a rare case, but you obviously know how NOT to ruin sigs with texts. The effects are nice, but the bright spot at the far right should be darkened out as it draws away from your render.
Other than than, quite nice.
Second one is hawttt. Except for a little bit of contraflow.