Firstly, you used a far too complicated secondary text, and the logo's not too bad - it would look just as effective on a business card as on a huge billboard.
Firstly, you used a far too complicated secondary text, and the logo's not too bad - it would look just as effective on a business card as on a huge billboard.
The background text is really bad alltogether, the primary text looks really good, the secondary one in the middle which reads "Advertising" is bad, the image seems really low quality too.