-The render needs to blend wit the background more
-You need to choose your text better. The text should match the background and render and also blend with both.
To plain, It's alright but you need to play around with photoshop, Use more effects Fiddle with opacity, Make it fitt all in as one. I had a few problem getting into Photoshop, But i found a site http://www.guildinn.com/forum/tutorials/ you may think, Oh tutorials are shit, They can't teach me nothing I rather my own personal Style, Well i did that, But once i started tutorials, i mixed my own personal Styles In with some of the tutorials and got some Great Results, I've personal done tutorials 5-10 times, and my work quality is really increased.