I like the first one but I think the pink effects on the left and right side should be switched together (the light side on the left should be on the right and vice versa), but that's just my opinion. ^_^ Also it looks a bit plain on the right side.
Not that bad tbh . Most of the people on sythe are beginners. I like the wolverine one the best. They're both very good imo. I really like the placement on the second one. On the first, I think you could have brightened it up on the shoulders with a pink soft brush set to linear dodge. I love them both. 9/10. I REALLY Love the text on them. The first has great text. I love how it goes hard pink, normal pink, baby pink .