First smudge

[Tst1]

I went for my first smudge this evening, took me longer than I had hoped for though.

I think it turned out pretty good for my first smudge attempt, what do you guys think?

 

[terrif]

looks pretty cool, but would be better if there was more detail imo.

 

[ssylass]

i think behind the master cheif should be black. looks good though, 7/10

 

[bizcuits21]

Too much negative space(white) go back and fill the background space with black.

 

[Adusik24]

it looks rlly cool

 

[hampe-92]

I think it's ok... but too much empty space.. add some bg , but not just plain black as the other guy said thought... but don't make it too much if u get what i mean..

 

[just un dude]

picture is too small or too much white on sides

 

[squidge]

Too much negative space. Fill the b/g or dupe and smudge. Also, when you smudge you should always smudge in one direction to give your tag flow. Good luck in your next sig.

 

[vagabundoso]

wow this is good for your first smudge =O

dont make the bg black... thatll ruin it... make it like a soft tan or a gradient or soemthing ..... itll keep it nice.... just white is also pretty cool but maybe like a little bit of text on the white or soemthing....cause it loooks really plain ....

but keeping it the way it is... is still realllly nice =) gj

i also like the smuding in different ways.... sometimes you dont need flow to look good

 

[idkaboutthis]

hmm for a first try not bad, but it does need more detail too it.