I know what you mean Haunted but I really suck at the Pen tool it was mostly for fun but I understand where you're coming from. I'm not dismissing your point at all. I think I SHOULD cut down on downloaded stuff. I love your work anyway Haunted =]
Alright, what I see here is a lack of flow, most of all. You've got arrows in all directions. You've got the same brushes, flipped and repeating, and even the color placement feels off. It's not terrible, but it needs much work.