Latest Work

[FattBoy008]

my latest work, tried to take some comments into consideration, the ironman 1 is my latest, and my favourite, for that i tried to be me colourful as i normally prefer the darkish colours,no im not emo, well please comment

removed: to embarassing

 

[bizcuits21]

On 1 and 3, the renders seem to be in a strange shape(iron man appears fat, and the ff7 one looks cropped to hard) Stay away from text like that also.

 

[FattBoy008]

On 1 and 3, the renders seem to be in a strange shape(iron man appears fat, and the ff7 one looks cropped to hard) Stay away from text like that also.

Ok , i will take that into consideration, what sort of text would you suggest, could you maybe give me some comments on the ironman one as i would like to here about that since it is my best peice imo, Thank you

 

[Jesse]

You didn't pixel them down to a ratio, so some look demented. No flow/background. Bad text choice, no effects. To me all it looks like is a render (badly) cropped down and slapped on a background you liked (doesn't go with the actual render) and put a font you liked. =/

 

[Clank]

Embossed text and outer glow = a big nono.
Try to add my focus, maybe a light source.