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3rd Signature Attempt - Vector

Myrtile

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Went for more of a vector like signature attempt this time, so please CnC >_<
 
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Seems too basic in my opinion. A few random circles around a render which has been duplicated and a basic background. Is the lighting on the sig yours though? If so the light source itself is good, but I'd like to see some better shadows
 
Seems too basic in my opinion. A few random circles around a render which has been duplicated and a basic background. Is the lighting on the sig yours though? If so the light source itself is good, but I'd like to see some better shadows
Yeah I get what your saying and shall take into consideration and yes the lighting in the signature was done by me, thanks. :)
 
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The simplicity is what i like about it. :D so keep going like this m8

What i'd have done is bledning in more of the circles tho. idk how to express what i mean :/
 
I like it, but I feel that you should do more. Signatures of this style usually have a lot more going on in them, like lines, multiple colors, just lots of stuff in general, but not so many that it looks spammed and random
 
Simplicity is bliss. Walk into any modern art museum and look around. Circles everywhere. ((Personally I think its some 21st century theme))

I do like the simplicity, but maybe go a little deeper and add a 3 dimension effect. By this I mean maybe extend a circle out a bit (cover part of the screen/render?), use a Gaussian blur on it and make it look like a photo focused in on your Flareon Then do the same with a circle farther back, just make it have that focused feel!

Try it!

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To me all it really needs is a little depth. Maybe a shadow on the focal? Just mess around with it. Other than that it looks nicee =]
 
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I like the flow, and you did a good job with the colors in this. The part that makes a vector tag awesome is the composition and this is where you are lacking. You should consider taking a look at the rules of thirds and the golden ratio to learn how to position your effects and focal.
 
Absolutely love the simplicity of this! I think the colours and the placement of the lighting work really well in this. Although like the others said, it needs that little more touch of depth in it.
 
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I like the flow, and you did a good job with the colors in this. The part that makes a vector tag awesome is the composition and this is where you are lacking. You should consider taking a look at the rules of thirds and the golden ratio to learn how to position your effects and focal.

This. The intended focal was obvious however my eyes were directed elsewhere.
 
Honestly, I like it a lot, especially since it's only your third. Though, one thing I would suggest is turning down the light source just a tad.
 
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