There is too much negative space. Try adding a gradient to bring out the text more. Not sure if that is a stroke, or the style of the font (outlining), it's too thick.
There is too much negative space. Try adding a gradient to bring out the text more. Not sure if that is a stroke, or the style of the font (outlining), it's too thick.
what you did is take your 3d style an try to use them effects in 2d. you need to change your whole style. try making a mood bored before you start designing. when i make somthing 80% of my time is spent on other thing rather than in the program. you need to plan out your designs a bit better, don't just open the program and go.