New Sig

[XSafire]

My Sig

compared to old one

1-10

 

[Fouisgras]

2nd is terrible. 1st is not much better. I believe the first would be a shit load better if you took that pattern on the upper left hand corner and applied it to the rest of the sig instead of that horrid red backgruond you're using.

 

[Faskist]

Urghhhhhhhh those white lines!

 

[Decisive]

I agree with Fouisgras. The sig doesn't really have much of a flow. You didn't really attempt to blend the render into the backround. The text isn't really that great. The new one is better than the old one but they're pretty much riding in the same boat.

 

[me likes pies]

^^I agree with Fouisgras, it would look alot better then the red background.
Eff you guise..... 2 of you beat me *cries*

 

[XSafire]

^^^^k...

i was trying to do something like the white lines lite up the right side of the picture while the left side was dark

k I try ur suggestions...

Here is following Fouisgras' suggestion:

i just basically raped the brushes

Another attempt...

I just placed the text there, didnt do anything on purpose as I am going to take the best one and then tweak it.
^this one I blended the render somewhat to the background. And got rid of the white lines. SO there you go Darby and Decisive. It still needs something on the right though.

More suggestions and which of these 2 is better

 

[SMX]

Well, I kinda like it.

 

[Feaver Wind]

on ur second post, i like the one with the white lines better.... Makes everything stand out more in my opinion.

 

[T R 1 B A L]

use the 1st one on your second post =], its flow byfar looks the best and the colour scheme + brushes fit

 

[Faskist]

^^^^k...

i was trying to do something like the white lines lite up the right side of the picture while the left side was dark

k I try ur suggestions...

Here is following Fouisgras' suggestion:

i just basically raped the brushes

Another attempt...

I just placed the text there, didnt do anything on purpose as I am going to take the best one and then tweak it.
^this one I blended the render somewhat to the background. And got rid of the white lines. SO there you go Darby and Decisive. It still needs something on the right though.

More suggestions and which of these 2 is better

You have next to no ideas, and you're trying to fill that colossal space?

 

[teh 1337 pwner]

ctrl shift u the render on the black and white one.

 

[Rise]

I like it, 8/10.

 

[Vlad]

Those lines are burning my eyes =[ they don't flow with the sig...

 

[Dark Devil]

I like the background in the first one second one kind of. 8/10

 

[burrell2]

amazing, really good work!

 

[Jansen]

^^^^k...

i was trying to do something like the white lines lite up the right side of the picture while the left side was dark

k I try ur suggestions...

Here is following Fouisgras' suggestion:

i just basically raped the brushes

Another attempt...

I just placed the text there, didnt do anything on purpose as I am going to take the best one and then tweak it.
^this one I blended the render somewhat to the background. And got rid of the white lines. SO there you go Darby and Decisive. It still needs something on the right though.

More suggestions and which of these 2 is better

An improvement, for sure.

Try to avoid just brushpamming for a background.

Try a smaller canvas, too. 333x111 is my preferred size, but thats a little smaller than ordinary.

350x150 or 390x130, but 500x200 is way large, unless you reeeeally have a good way to use the space

 

[be ez]

PEN WHORE!!!!! Still isn't that much better and it still is way to big. All you did was use pen to incorperate the render into the sig.