My first ever sig!

[Pur3 5kiler]

Yep...First one...Got CS3 yesterday.

Be brutal!

Tell me how to improve.

C&C

 

[warning dds]

well the background dont match the picture at all. but i like the text style.

 

[Sin666]

The brush strokes you used are random, dull, and have an awkward focus near the middle of the sig. If you want to be a brush whore (like me), you should try downloading a variety of different brushes; never use just one set.

Additionally, the background shouldn't just be a backdrop - it should be tailored to fit the actual render, in color, composition, and depth. Green on solid blue won't work

My best advice would be to take a look at some tutorials. It'll give you an idea how to deal with the common issues.

 

[Pur3 5kiler]

Thanks guys, looking at some tuts on youtube. I know the backround is dull/doesnt match

And yes sin, I want to be a brush Whore

 

[Decisive]

Well for one the background doesn't blend with the render. The placement of the render is very poor. The really looks like you just make a blue background, added a couple of Fractal brushes, smacked the render on the left side and put text on the right. In over all the colors, render position, background is all wrong.

Even though moving visuals can be good to watch trying joining Deviantart, they have plenty of good tutorials for you to improve.

 

[Pur3 5kiler]

Thanks man

 

[G3`]

=] Render needs some help, You got to work on blending it better. but its a start.

 

[Pur3 5kiler]

Yea, im looking for some good renders but I cant find any.

 

[spector90]

I think theres a render pack somewhere.

 

[pur3min]

Try putting a feather on the render to smooth it out (Make it less pixelated). And maybe if you're going to choose those colours, set the render layer to overlay so it 'blends' in more.

Looks good though

 

[Topless Queen]

Pretty nice for a starter good job

 

[Decisive]

You could always try googling Render, and there it should give you a lot of render sites. There are a lot out there so they shouldn't be hard to find.