I think it's pretty dull, boring, and you don't need much skill to be able to produce that work. I don't like the lighting or the text, and i don't know what that lines for as it does nothing to make it any better.
first of all ugleh comes form the gradient map, Get colors, key? Second, all you did was move a bar, wdf? and then the next is why the hell does a guy have a fetish about an abs commercial?