Looks good, I remember watching that tutorial. Next time I'd try incorporating your own feel into it, maybe changing the font and using different colors. It looks like you can follow instruction well, keep up the good work!
I think I saw the thumbnail of this tut on youtube, didnt click it though
Anyways, have an experiment with cinema 4d, if you continue tutorials you will begin to keep using that style and won't really learn anything new.