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  1. X Headshot X

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    What do you guys think? :eek:
     
    X Headshot X, Nov 14, 2013
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    not bad mate!

    Things to maybe change:
    The cross-hairs are quite big for the text
    maybe drop the opacity of the smoke on the right hand side
    the little flares or whatever in the background dont really match the rest of the piece

    Cheers:D
     
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    Nice mate :)

    Now to get it better, u should change the opacity of the smoke like hnc said.

    I would get a better font or something. It looks like straight if u know what i mean.

    Way too much shadow. Should be less.

    Put smoke on the left. It stops before the end of the name...

    Good job :) continue working and ull have it :)
     
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    I like it looks slick :)
     
    Johnsonman, Nov 15, 2013
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    I like the overall design :D

    I agree with the others comments on the smoke and shadowing. Have you considered putting the cross hairs in the O of headshot? I think that would be pretty neat :D
     
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    heres an ideal, what if you made the o in to some type of head and the crosshairs will be over the head an it will have a bullet hole in its head.
     
    bigk1121, Nov 15, 2013
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    I think it looks good. Nice effects and the 3d text is great :)

    7/10
     
    Matty ICE, Nov 15, 2013
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