Fight Club

[Steaderz]

I haven't attempted a signature or really anything in photoshop for quite a while, thoughts on this?

 

[ZippyGFX]

All the empty space makes it look unfinished, I suggest adding more to it before getting some criticism.

 

[veteranlolplayer]

nice

 

[filth]

interesting concept with pretty good execution but the canvas is too large for the minimal amount of detail contained. blurring on the render is a little off, too.

 

Negative space is all good and well but there's simply too much. The whole piece overall is too bright also with the background being white so there really lacks a focal point. Personally I'm not a fan of the pink as when you think of fight club you think of grunge, red for blood etc. This is kind of showcased in the splatters but then the use of a cursive font for fight club just looks out of place.

 

[Ritysayo]

Negative space is all good and well but there's simply too much. The whole piece overall is too bright also with the background being white so there really lacks a focal point. Personally I'm not a fan of the pink as when you think of fight club you think of grunge, red for blood etc. This is kind of showcased in the splatters but then the use of a cursive font for fight club just looks out of place.

Yeah, I never posted anything before because the ctc I would give has already been said.

But yeah, I think the image looks more like a dancer's signature than a fighting signature. The pinkness and writing makes me think of a flamingo dancer >.<
(Sort of reminds me of Flamingo off from One Piece)

 

[meowmix89]

agreed looks good but way to much focus on the right hand side