Advice

hi i did some graphics for a person - any advice on improving for next time please.

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the first thing is to not cut the renders off that will make it look way better

 

-Improve the c4d text quality.
-The edges of the sig is just cut off, use a soft brush and erase the edges so it's not as hard.
-Vouches isn't linked to anything ( Not really a huge deal )
-No real focal point
-The background is just redish stuff and the black which don't look good. ( Try to use different things as background )

Just some things that don't really work with the sig.

 

Man you really need to improve on your rendering skills.
That 3D text suuucks.

 

"suuucks" lol thanks for the advice

 

Sorry just speaking out what was on my mind.
I suggest you learn how to style text in your 3D program. Which I assume is Cinema 4D.
You need to learn how to add lighting.
You also need to learn how to add materials, and how to format them properly on the text.

And that's just advice for the text. Not including the random stocks in the background.

Most of the aspects mentioned above can be found on youtube.

Once you've got the hang of rendering, then come back.
Then you need to learn how to layerstyle and add effects in photoshop itself.
But that can be saved for the day you get to that stage

 

cheers mate

 

here is a tut i did on how to add texture on a material in c4d its a simple tut but you could learn alot from it an it may give you alot of ideals http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PLh4J-IGdSA

 

Yeah i know how to lol

Thanks anyway mate

 

It isn't too bad if you still consider yourself a beginner. The brushes clip on the edges though, so you would want to go in with a soft brush and soften that out or just adjust them to your liking. Also, I see you understand how to use brushes so what you want to start doing now is understanding composition and layer styles. Keep practicing!

 

Yeah defo something i need to work on after my exams also, how did you get the graphics artist title? looks soo cool