Smudge'

[ZippyGFX]

CnC Welcome, Just some more smudging.

 

I don't see any real emphasis in the focal & it needs a little more... if you know what I mean. It looks pretty plain :S

 

[Kiwi]

Smudge away!

 

[two headed boy]

the smudging technique is pretty good, i like it.

try working with a larger canvas and then re-sizing, it makes it easier to add detail.

the intended focal is weak due to sharpening issues which are also ruining the depth.

composition could be better, i feel like the flow is lacking too, its chaotic.

colours are boring and dont really mesh well.

lighting needs work.

over contrasted

that effect c4d line thing ruins the flow

 

[Matty ICE]

This is some pretty cool looking smudging. Try to blend them more with a blur so it doesn't look so rough.

7/10

 

[Lvl 75 Def]

Smudge away!

spam away!


Ot: meh, kinda kewl smudging. but it's nothing too fancy pantsy