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Discussion in 'Music' started by Onebereal, Feb 12, 2012.

  1. Onebereal

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    I think the lyrics were good, but you don't really seem like you have a good voice for it. I suggest you keep writing and maybe your voice will get better as you mature and practice, but always keep writing even if the voice doesn't follow.
     
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    It's not turrrible, but sounds more like poetry someone would turn in for a school assignment.
     
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    You don't have to say nigga or rap about money for it to be rap.
     
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    Never said you did. You don't know me, but I don't like rap in general. The fact that I didn't completely shun you should be a good sign. =]
     
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    Just because you don't rap about pussy/money/weed doesn't make you a lyricist
     
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    Infact, the best lyricist's rap about life, like Eminem.
     
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    You have no flow imo.
     
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    Yeah true i love eminem style.
     
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    I really like the lyrics, however you need to work on your flow and delivery some. Also need to develop your own style. If you did this, you'd be set.
     
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    i like the lyrics also, and yeah you gota work on some flow and work on your own sound
     
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    you don't define what makes a person a lyricist.
     
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    The video is removed?
     
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    you no rap about killing people and selling cocaine you no good, jk

    keep it up though i have a friend who's like 16 and he's amazing at rapping he can freestyle for like half an hour straight he just works at his flow
     
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    meh you removed the video? :/
     
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