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Not a big fan of the border. Also looks like captain america, space stock, fractals, color correcting and that's it
also not blened well, and doesn't seem to be in the rule of thirds
 
Not a big fan of the border. Also looks like captain america, space stock, fractals, color correcting and that's it
also not blened well, and doesn't seem to be in the rule of thirds

It fits rot fine.
 
I like the "abstract" space theme that you've got. Captain America with his shield is still the main focus though, which is good. One thing I will say, is that I heard that you are meant to use the "Rule of Thirds" to position people/characters in these types of art. Good none the less :)
 
Not a big fan of the border. Also looks like captain america, space stock, fractals, color correcting and that's it
also not blened well, and doesn't seem to be in the rule of thirds

Rule of thirds is only there as a suggestion. People can place their renders where ever they'd like.
 
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Rule of thirds is only there as a suggestion. People can place their renders where ever they'd like.
Yes but it's a very good one. It's in your best interest to follow it.
 
I really like it, could do with a better border. But I do really like it, you should just leave it with no border.
 
Needs more foreground effects and some depth added. You could darken the background more and more towards the edges to start with. I think the colours are alright and the current effects are decent. Keep it up!
 
focal placement could be improved
c4d effects are distracting due to their sharpness and composition
shadows on the render dont make sense

to be honest it looks like you just got a star stock and slapped on some effect c4ds along with a render

you can do a lot better than this,
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs18/f/2007/130/7/7/Full_Signature_Tutorial_by_Senthrax.jpg

use this tut, it helped me out so much when i first started tagging

also what spray said
 
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