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[BOUNTYLEADER]

Hello,

I coded a new website today , for costumers who need serverices and they want to pay I will rederect them to my site, And there you got paypal buttoms + you need to agree few things so you can't claim it back, I rode it on a sticky here so If I don't get scammed .

my question to you guys is what do you think about the "layout"

 

[TxT]

Looks good, banner needs redoing. I could make you a banner in return for a little service maybe?

 

[Decoda117]

It looks pretty decent but not great

 

[thatguy1234]

i like the orange and the stallion. but overall it looks boring, too much white and/or blank space

 

[BOUNTYLEADER]

Looks good, banner needs redoing. I could make you a banner in return for a little service maybe?

hmm, If you can make me a nice banner, I'am willing to do some service for it in return.

 

[WeRnIE]

Too much white space, needs more info. Good start.

 

[kill dank]

I don't like how there's so many words in the banner

 

[stui]

Get kinaesthic to make you a web layout or a banner for you as he is maybe the best GFX artist in the WORLD :O

But if you dont wanna pay 60$ + i could do the banner and layout, pm me if interested.

OT: to much white space, Change the font, Make sure every new word in the title/Words with a capital e.g. Hello Sythe I Am Doing A Charm Service compared to hello sythe i am doing a charm service

 

[Spraynwipe]

The colours contrast too much, you should pick ones that compliment better, and don't make them quite so bright. The choice of font is questionable as it doesn't go with the style. It could do with a bit of flare, as it is fairly simple and not very eye catching at the moment. Sorry if this sounds harsh, but if you want to improve, critique (and practice) is the best way. Also this belongs in the graphics gallery forum.

 

[BOUNTYLEADER]

okay, thank you guys I will work on it
And okay, I din't know I posted this wrong . I will work on it , thank you all for the comments.
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