Eh.

I was told to mixup my styles soo:

 

This is an amazing tutorial that will cover the basics:



I don't claim it as my tutorial. I just thought I would share because it helped me.

 

You still make the same mistakes you made last time:

Your render is in the middle.

 

Well besides what Imagine said about the render being directly in the middle, there are some blending and depth issues with the tag. Just keep at it

 

Thanks guys, I'm trying

 

The rule of thirds should be your bible. The cross points in the image above are the power points. If you place things on these, the eye is naturally drawn to them.

 

That tutorial is great, thanks neo! and i like your piece just too much red i think.