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looks pretty good...here are a list of things I don't like about it (too lazy to go into detail right now)
pixie dust needs to be erased off the women (mostly the shirt)
the left side seems repetitive, could just be the covered up c4ds though
the lighting seems super forced
the snowflake with a clipping mask on it is a big WTF?
although there is depth, it needs more...
composition could be better...
pixie dust needs to be erased off the women (mostly the shirt)
the left side seems repetitive, could just be the covered up c4ds though
the lighting seems super forced
the snowflake with a clipping mask on it is a big WTF?
although there is depth, it needs more...
composition could be better...
Thanks for the CnC, I'm very out of practice as you can tell. Appreciate it ^^
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The color needs work because the black, with the warm colors, then the hints of purple doesn't work with the piece. It is way too oversharpened and it needs more atmosphere.
Pixles on the render itself distraction from the focus.
Lighting is off.. What do I mean? You have a main focus of light coming from top left, but her entire face is completely lit up.
No flow
I don't realize exactly what you did minus pasting a c4d and a render, adding what looks like some dots, and then some lighting.
Make something without a C4D.
Lighting is off.. What do I mean? You have a main focus of light coming from top left, but her entire face is completely lit up.
No flow
I don't realize exactly what you did minus pasting a c4d and a render, adding what looks like some dots, and then some lighting.
Make something without a C4D.
Thanks for the comments, I'm very out of practice it seems.
Challenge accepted.
Tmoe said:
Challenge accepted.