Advice?

[runzz]

I know my signature is not my render. I payed for it :x, but this is my first render .

Any advice on how to make it better? Or is it ok for the first time?

 

[Kinaesthic]

Well, the canvas is way too big for the actual work.. SO get that fixed in the first place.
Secondly, make it look more interesting, throw some lighting in there or so as it doesn't look very appealing at this moment.
I'll give further CnC once you have completed these two steps

 

[Noam]

Good first Render. l2Background

 

[Paralysisâ„¢]

A Background would be nice but the text looks awesome just needs a bit more lighting

 

[Spraynwipe]

Well, the canvas is way too big for the actual work.. SO get that fixed in the first place.

Image > crop > crop transparent does the trick nicely.

Agree it needs some better light, it seems fairly flat and bland. Try adding some effects in both the background and foreground, which will also help with depth. Subtle additions like glow, drop shadow and reflection could spruce up the work also.