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[surj]

cnc

 

[w000t]

Looks incredibly over sharpened mate tone that down just a tad .

Everything else looks pretty good to me.
KIU

 

[T R 1 B A L]

too sharp
chaotic flow
bland compo, doesn't really go shape wise
leg kills flow

 

[Expulsion]

no clear focal and too chaotic

 

[surj]

no clear focal and too chaotic

how is the focal not clear?

 

[T R 1 B A L]

no clear focal and too chaotic

Focal's pretty damn clear

how is the focal not clear?

Don't reply to my post then pussy.

Also dyst joined TTR on PR.

SO TECHNICALLY I AM DYST'S TEAM MATE OMG>!>!>!>!>?!?!?!??!

 

[Expulsion]

ahaha i saw something completely different at 1 am

im a fag

 

[Relentless_x]

very sharp and the flows a little out of wack but i kinda like it

 

[Embree]

ahaha i saw something completely different at 1 am

im a fag

or you were just giving stupid cnc

 

[Kinaesthic]

Let's get to the point and not dwell off-topic here guys..
It looks fine to me, it's a bit over-sharpened and it does lack a bit of colour tho.. But it ain't that bad..?