New Style?

Hey guys. Made a new sig.
From this



To this



I tried going for a sort of vintage look.

I rendered the girl, but kept the background, so I could place C4D's better.
I basically threw in 2 stocks for the color contrast.
Cut each C4D individually to get what I was going for.
Just used some soft brushes on soft light for added lighting.
Little pentool.

What do you guys think? I like the outcome c:

 

Looks nice bro, I like all your sigs. Simplicity is best! good job

 

I like it, its not as cluttered as most of the others signatures, i guess that's just my personal preference tho.

 

wow i actually really really like it. If you could PM me a price i'd be happy to purchase one.

 

double post soz, comp lagged*

 

You have nothing going on in the left inch of the signature. You move extremes. Move it over so that her face is on the rule of thirds to the left as to adjust optical preservatives. Also, you seem to have made it too light. The darkest spot is the text, which doesn't work. Something needs to contract the darkness that you're going for in the text.

 

Thanks guys!

 

Use the rule of thirds bro.

 

The focal point is too big my friend.

However I like what you're trying to do.

Here are some suggestions for a vintage feel. Maybe make a white-pale orange gradient map or something and simply reduce it's opacity leaving the blending mode on normal.