First Signature

[Dehryl]

Hey guys, this is my first signature (and my first attempt at DP). All characters (except for the text) were painted with a tablet.

Mostly looking for criticism on how to improve the two RuneScape characters. Thanks.

 

[Smurfette]

Nice man, can you make me one?

 

I don't know much if anything about GFX, but I'd recommend you don't have the guy on the right's sword block the L.

Besides that though it looks really good and best of luck to the rest you make.

 

[Dehryl]

Nice man, can you make me one?

I would, but I just started digital painting and my creations are crappy at best.

 

[OneLove]

Better then I could do, but still not very good. Why'd you put the dot in the trollin?

 

[kayosman]

Better then I could do, but still not very good. Why'd you put the dot in the trollin?

That's not a dot, it's where the sword covers up the L.
It's ok, but a little bit confusing (as in I don't understand the text with the characters).