First in a while...

[Alteranz]

Eh...

V3

V4

V5 - not sure if it's an improvement or not

 

[rickjames928]

I actually really like it, thought i prefer dark backgrounds ^_^

 

[Alteranz]

Just realised it looks like she has a blood nose...

 

[Spraynwipe]

Love it. Besides the soft brush under her chin Throw some bubble type C4Ds in there instead, would look great.

 

[Ghouben]

Very nice
I love the way you made it look as if she is holding the C4D, did you smudge her thumb?

 

[Alteranz]

Added a V2 - I need to brighten it a bit more I think.

 

[bosnianbro]

the arm on the bottom looks like it doesnt fit properly, feels like its not ment to be there and removes the focal point from her face

other then that nice sig

 

[T R 1 B A L]

Too much negative space/black used - more effects would be nicer, and her hand looks somewhat distinctively grey, compared to the rest of the piece which is pretty saturated and obviously colourful.

 

[Alteranz]

V4 now.

 

[Lured Yah]

I like the v3 more

 

[Alteranz]

Added a V5 - not sure if it's an improvement or not.

 

[Lured Yah]

v3/v5 > v4
doing good ^^

 

[w000t]

Really blurry on v4/v5.

I don't really like the random white dots/pink soft brush.

You've done way better mate.

 

[Spraynwipe]

V1 was the best honestly, v4/v5 have weird colours that ruined it for me.

 

[Ulti not]

I like it overall, but the thing that makes it out of shape is the dark colors. I would say stick with light colors.

 

[Alteranz]

Shit... my signatures always look different on different computer monitors. On this screen the signatures look horrible and have messed up colours as well as brightness, whereas on my laptops screen they're dark and hardly visible. I increased the brightness to compensate for what TR1BAL said and also what I saw on my Laptop, yet at the moment it looks horrid. Arghh I will never win! Haha

 

[cosrob97]

I liked V1 the best and then V3. The darker colours look better from my point of view.

 

[Aroxez]

I like the darker-ness of V3.

 

[Haunted]

You've focused to much on blurring the c4d's, I know you wanted to create depth, but sometimes it's better to not try as hard as you've did here.

 

[Sh4dows]

I personally like v3 the best lighting it up makes it seem a bit well I don't know I just think it looks better.