00Se7en

[Harry]

This is one i did for 00Se7en just for the experience hopefully he likes it, if there is any changes you want me to make let me know.

Give me Feedback please

 

[PIAV]

That is a brilliant effort, one tip I do have is that you should make the letters slightly clearer, I am struggling to see the letters properly, it could just be my eyesight though!

 

Personally, its way too crowded. This makes the text hard to read, which becomes more of a pain when its a name like that (no offence). Other than that, your reflections seem kind of choppy, try to smoothen them out. Keep practicing!