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Discussion in 'Graphics Gallery' started by Harry, Feb 18, 2013.

  1. Harry

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    00Se7en

    This is one i did for 00Se7en just for the experience hopefully he likes it, if there is any changes you want me to make let me know.
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    Give me Feedback please :)
     
  2. PIAV

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    That is a brilliant effort, one tip I do have is that you should make the letters slightly clearer, I am struggling to see the letters properly, it could just be my eyesight though!
     
  3. MoonGlare

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    00Se7en

    Personally, its way too crowded. This makes the text hard to read, which becomes more of a pain when its a name like that (no offence). Other than that, your reflections seem kind of choppy, try to smoothen them out. Keep practicing!
     
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