Mischief Kids

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Mischief Kids
  1. Unread #1 - Jul 20, 2011 at 12:36 AM
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    Poem I wrote called Mischief Kids, C&C is always appreciated!

     
  3. Unread #2 - Jul 20, 2011 at 6:04 AM
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    nice one
     
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    I thought this was very good, well put together. How long did it take to write?
     
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    Yeah agreed with above you tended to drift off a little but man that was good, keep it up it was good
     
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    10-15 minutes

    Thanks for the feedback guys :)
     
  11. Unread #6 - Aug 2, 2011 at 6:45 AM
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    Solid effort. Made any more vlogs recently?
     
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    Nice man!, I've always felt you can do alot more technically if you use verses though.
     
  15. Unread #8 - Aug 2, 2011 at 3:27 PM
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    very nice poem man, you should consider writing a book.
     
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