I love bread!

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I love bread!
  1. Unread #1 - Jan 15, 2010 at 2:55 PM
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    I love bread!

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    C&C? My sigs usually comprise of 20-layered complicated busy things, so I tried to simple it down a little bit. Let me know what you guys think :)
     
  3. Unread #2 - Jan 15, 2010 at 3:31 PM
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    I love bread!

    That's pretty nice.
    I think the lighting on the right is a bit too strong, but still good.
    Text looks nice (is the bluepig just a watermark or w.e so ppl don't rip?), and flow is okay.
    Good job :).
     
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    I love bread!

    Yea, name is just a watermark, didn't really fit anywhere else. Do you have any suggestions on what to do to improve?
     
  7. Unread #4 - Jan 15, 2010 at 9:51 PM
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    I love bread!

    It's very smooth and basic, I like the flowing feel to it.

    However, you see where the lighting is and the hair on the little character? It just looks a bit strange there, like the hair does.
     
  9. Unread #5 - Jan 15, 2010 at 9:54 PM
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    I love bread!

    I like this one. Stock flows well into the BG, not really over blended or forced. Nice work.
     
  11. Unread #6 - Jan 17, 2010 at 8:51 AM
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    I love bread!

    sharpen her eyes. Flow's tres sexy, text you should work on :)

    Maybe try to incorporate different colours?

    Good job ^_^
     
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