[Battle] Gtdarkpunisher VS raange pur3 [Battle]

Two verses each. One at a time. Will only count votes after each one of us post one verse.

Must respond with verse within 24 hours.


Alright lets take a second and try to put a light on you
Honestly you think your winning this fight between us two?
You should be honored to be considered my adversary
Trying to compete against this bright new visionary
You and your thick head think you got it all figured out
But Bitch you need to see what its really all about
Theres more than what you said about lyrical rhymes
Right now its seems your lost beyond our times

Every now and then I come up with simplistic little words
That will still sting like a bitch and yes have been heard
But your shit remains constant
And you continue to be arrogant
Ignoring how things are really meant
What the hell are you trying to represent?
If you can pull something out of your ass
And put up a fight, I wont give it a pass


Ill just keep track of those who vote before theyre suppose to.

 

Im sick of this fake, not fuckin knowing his place
He needs to run from this stage before I diminish his name
He thinks he's number 1 in the ranks
But I'ma bury this lame coz I have endless raps in the tank
Yo, you need to read over your raps before you post that shit
Coz I'll blow back quick to dominate that standard: Low - Wack Script
I have the whole crowd tellin me "raange, you owned that bitch"
I'm waitin to explode like a flame combined with a gas stove switch

Now listen, you have to actually know this kid
To rap, you really do need skill
You've still got ur learners permit while I have my license to kill
My raps have the ability to frighten, to thrill, and to delight when I spill
I'm burnin him with lines like a fuckin barbecue grill
This guy manages his weight by poppin anti-pregnancy pills

 

Range already won... Yours was awful. You've basically defeated yourself already.

 

Raange.

Competitions already over

 

Do you realise ur place now gtd?
I told u

also, no self votes

 

No shit so self votes.


Hell I know my place aint at the top but its higher than yours
But I cant still take you to my butcher shop and leave you all over the floor
Cut you into pieces cause saying your the game with some whack as shit on
But at least your rhymes arent that lame it still gonna get my spit on
Unfortunatley your like an ant to me that wont roam around any longer
Stop your crappy ass chant since my words are still stronger
Bitch Im barely loading my gun to shoot ya til you beg for death
Puttin in my ammo to have some fun shooting you til your last breath

Too bad you aint got the balls to pull the trigger and kill some prick on the spot
Fortunately I can since my balls are bigger and my accuracy is on the dot
I manage my weight by pullin myself up when little shits like you try to put me down
Shit ill make you shut the fuck up and reveal you for no more than a faggot ass clown
You may have some lyrical talent writing these lines
But I barely take any time and they come out just fine
Bitch you better get on yours knees
before you end up in pieces around the seven seas

 

2nd verse

Haha, man that's some funny shit, you've resorted to tough talk
You just admitted I had talent so what'd you say that I sucked for?
I beat you the first time, this second round isn't necessary
Ya raps are basic primary shit while I graduated secondary
Raange is legendary, too good to be beat
You couldn't beat me lyrically so you decide to talk street
How your so violent with knives and you'll blaze me up with ya heat
I think even you know its safe to label yourself with defeat
I'ma keep this discrete, your skills ain't worth the attention kid
You leave the readers to be dumb after every one of your sentences

You want me to get on my knees? What you want me to suck ur dick?
I should have seen that coming from a faggot piece of shit like this
Dude, you need to learn to take advice from your superiors
And if you try to disrespect me you'll be sorry, I'm serious
Leave your brain dead and vanish making the cause of death as mysterious
I'm sick of being the one having to clean up after ya internet periods
Cmon man, just remove ya tampon and take a look at urself
This is what happens when you try to fuck with raange's lyrical wealth

 

I said you were below me but now i see. I mentioned your talent since i saw some good things with your first verse. Haha man i had a laugh with the tampon shit.:laugh: Yeah, I know you beat me this battle. Ill take some time to improve, by trying to be clearing with my figures of speech and comparisons. You have more creativity than me, I can give you that. >_<

Well Thanks for the fun.

 

lol
righto, sweet cya

 

This is like some Irish guy rapping against an Eastside/Westside rapper..

 

you guys have no idea... its not all about the lyrics its mainly about flow you should try recording yourself sprayinand then we will see who has a beter flow

 

what?

 

Raange hands down.

 

range woooooooooooooot