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  1. Izad

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    My First Layout - honest feedback
    This is the first thread layout I've ever made.

    What are your thoughts?
    Suggestions on improvements?

    I appreciate honest feedback: both positive and negative critique!

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    Izad, Feb 5, 2019
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  2. Wortel

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    My First Layout - honest feedback
    Looks like a layout I'd see on a RuneScape Private Server. Imo too much text and it doesn't overlay very well on the layout itself, but that's just me.
     
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  3. Izad

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    I agree, the text explaining the games aren't necessary imo. What do you mean it doesn't overlay?
     
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    Idk feels like it doesn't fit together. Might be just me tho.
     
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    Text glow make it hard to read tbh...
     
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  6. Izad

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    Will keep that in mind for the future
     
    Izad, Feb 6, 2019
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    My First Layout - honest feedback
    too much text but that was prob customer's request, right ?

    7,5/10
     
    Guglio, Feb 7, 2019
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    Yeah, I would definitely remove some if it was up to me. But in the end, as long as the customer is happy, I'm happy :)
     
    Izad, Feb 7, 2019
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