My best sig yet - Rate /10 please

It's my best sig yet - Rate out of 10 please, and preferably only constructive criticism.

 

Not a bad attempt at all..

The main problem i have with it is the render, it's extremely hard to see. The sig as a whole does not really have a focal point, if anything the text is because that's the lightest and easiest colour to see in the sig.

The text's font is OK, although the colour is wrong IMO. It should not be the lightest point of the sig.

If you created the background yourself, well done. It's a nice grunge effect.

The lighting on the guys shouders is quite nice, again, if you created that yourself.

Again, choose a better render, which is actually visible, or make it visible yourself.

Hope i helped.

 

I cant seem to see the tongue on venom

 

Not the best but then again not bad....
Need to create a better focal point in the sig, maybe try to use some more techniques on the render to make it seem pop more, if that makes any sense...lol
But I like it thouh not bad not drop my pants good but a decent thing to look at.

 

Alright, I'll make the render much lighter...Thanks everyone for your help, especially Headshot ^.^ Guess I still have to read some more tuts
Anyways, yes I did make the background myself, and made the light on venom's shoulders far more visible.

 

7/10, it looks good. I can't really pick any bad points out, but just doesn't look good enough to get 10/10