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Feedback Needed
  1. Unread #1 - Apr 20, 2016 at 1:22 PM
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    Okay so. I started gfx a while ago then quit because I just felt like I was getting no better at it, but a couple weeks ago i started back and this is what i got soo far. Any HONEST feedback would be greatly appreciated guys.






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    I've also been doing a bunch of manipulation Effects and trying to do Signatures with Anime's and all. I'm having a lot of fun rn but really wanna improve!
     
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    Thank you! Do you know how i could export them from photoshop and not be so blurry? Or is it because of the renders I have used?
     
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    All good man! Thank you and see yah around buddy.
     
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    Look's like a solid piece of work. Deffinetly getting there, see you're going with the weed style, happy 420 my man.
     
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    ayyyy HAHAH you too man!
     
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    Make sure you're saving these out as .PNG and not .JPG

    Also, I'd tone it down on the contrast with the first one. Not sure if it's my monitor, but it's almost blinding.. haha
     
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    Thank you!! exactly what i needed and yes, it burns mine to lmao;)
     
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    Just made this. Any thoughts?
     
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    Looks good man, first two were a bit blurry. Looks good now!
     
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    This specific one seems to be a bit dull as far as the effects go, but you have done a good job with the lighting and making the image come together for sure. I feel like experimenting with different styles and effects will improve your ability ten-fold in the long run! Keep up the good work ^_^ .

    I like the sizing on this one, and the placement of the focal point.

    These are definitely improvements from the original ones you've posted. The main issues I am seeing with these are the location of your text. The name on there is very distracting from the focal point. Flow is everything, and if you are lacking flow, it can distract from what you wish for people to see. Are you using renders or stock images? Experimenting with both will also help. Practicing with manipulation stock images I have found is the best thing you can do for practice.
     
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    Honestly exactly what I needed dude. Could you add my Skype?
     
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    Looks awesome especially the first 1 love it haha.
     
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