new thread layout

went for a professional approach - nothing too fancy or overwhelming but something reasonably appealing that gets the point across

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I've always been a fan of simple layouts; too much graphics always take the appeal away from the content. Also, good luck on your sales! You won't have any trouble with those gfx, I'm sure of it.

EDIT: I think the "about Zune" section could use an uphaul a bit, I don't fancy the text compared to the simple text you got going on everywhere else.

 

thank you, this is useful feedback

 

Simple layouts are fine for non graphics stores, but the problem is, I'm shit at graphics and I could've made this. It's not showing me that it's worth using you than anyone else.

 

then why don't you?

 

the idea is header/body

different fonts for each respectively.

only time i don't apply this is prices section; it needs to be readable straight away

 

Overall nice job. The spacing on the pricing and your introduction is weird. Your fonts are all over the place as well. Might just be me but the white and green text on top of Sythe's blue is hard on the eyes.

I do agree with Lilmj27 a little bit because it is quite simple and you are a graphic designer. Might as well show your talents to the fullest.

 

You're looking at it the wrong way, why should I use you? You're not showing that in your layout, look at Moonglare's, is it overly complicated? Yes. But it shows what he can do

 

ah true but in my thread i have examples below showing what i can do,

fair point tho

 

I agree.

Simple isn't necessarily the right way to go with everything. Yes, dont get me wrong, I love simple graphics... but it depends on how you use them. Using a simple graphic as your main design, for a graphics shop, isn't necessarily the best idea. When you re looking at a gold shop, you love when it's simple and professional. However, when you're looking at a graphics shop, you want the graphics designer to standout from the others. If the graphics designer doesn't standout, you will simply go to someone else.

Id suggest to make a layout that's organized & have some effects in there. You ll have more customers, trust me! Also, try to integrate the images with your design. They seem to be just added in your layout, without adding the right luminosity & effects.

Hope it helps.
Best of luck with your shop

 

thanks for the feedback, useful asf imo ;-)

 

I think it looks pretty nice tbh. As others above me have said, it could use a bit more of a flare; however, it gets the job done quite nicely. Definitely a solid layout for a more professional type business, like a big goldseller

 

thanks, haha even if its not effective for myself, maybe itll show goldsellers they can go to me for thread layouts xD

thanks for the feedback guys, learnt alot

 

I think this is a pretty cool layout, i'm terrible with design but I love it when people keep it simple, good work

 

thank you for the feedback

i tried to keep it neat and symmetrical

 

Because he's not opening a graphics store?
For 6 years in the business this looks very sloppy, texts not alligned, text font doesn't fit. Prices thrown around, not alligned.
As he said I would not see why I should use you.

 

http://www.sythe.org/graphics-gallery/1916901-i-took-things-onboards-v2.html

He made another version.

Closed, for now. Zune, report this if you want more feedback on this thread layout & Ill reopen it.​