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Looks cool The colors could use some more vibrance [stronger color] though. I could see that pattern making a pretty dope tshirt.

 

More vibrance.

 

they look really bland to me. I like the second alot better though.

 

I like it -- it could definitely go on a shirt or something like that.

Also, I really like the cross on the top right. It definitely fits well.

 

Yeah, I thought it was a good balance.

 

Is this a finished piece?

 

Probably. I was in a photoshop mood the other day.

 

Not sure if that is smoke, but it could've been interpreted better.

Eg: The smoke is apart of her

As of now, it just looks like it's there just to be there.

Nice piece though, it has so much potential.

 

Bump dat shit.

 

It's too bright IMO

 

This, you did well fixing Color on second one though just the lighting issue

 

From Lucas while he's banned:

Liked the overall concept, and execution really well except the smoke could do with some shading with colors. Blending is nice but i do think V2 is a tad too vibrant imo. All in all very nice =D

 

Not bad.

 

From the arty girlfriend:

I like it, but I feel the focal point is too full on and complex.
Like one silhouette would be fine but I don't like the repetition of them inside each other.
I like the contrast of the soft 'smoke' with the harsh outlines of the color and the balance of the color to the white background.
It would look cool if he had "placed" it on the wall so it looked like graffiti.
My view:
I like it and it's a fuckload better then anything I could manage

 

Looks good. At first i thougt it would need more vibrancy but after seeing it. I like the original