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  1. ErasDesigns

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    Hello community,

    Made a banner with the Aqatix logo he already made the render :)

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    Feedback?
     
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    Stop with the texture spam and extreme top soft brushed lighting. It will immediately up the appeal of the piece 100%.
     
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    All your stuff looks washed out imo, as though you put a layer of grey over top with like 15% opacity. & try use up the empty space if possible.
     
  4. ErasDesigns

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    I duplicated the end result than added motion blur to it and erased the middle part and than lowered the strength of the duplicated layer that's why it look's washed that was my intention so you would have more focus on The logo

    Thanks for the feedback
     
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    You create focus on the focal by using effects that draw your eye to the focal coupled with effective use of concepts based around the rules of thirds.
     
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    result of cc's
     
  7. ErasDesigns

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    Thanks for the feedback all will work on these points :)
     
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    its alright does look abit washed out and would look better if u centered it better
     
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    Nothing's washed up about it. It looks really clean and good in my opinion. I do agree with the texture spam, and also try to make the text expand to fit most of the frame, add some lighting, sparks, etc. Make it more colorful
     
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    It looks quite dark and washed out. Wasn't sure what i was looking at at first.
     
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    Use the space buddy and try another effect. You re doing the same effect and textures on every work. Not bad tho. Keep it up!
     
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