Pencil work + Photoshop CNC <3

Took some photos of my camera and edited them little bit with photoshop for fun. Now uploading here to people see, text what is there saying "AVICI".

took about 1 Hour make this.

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The problem is I dont really see the text "Avici"in this :/ but whats the line in the middle doing like <><><><<><><><>

 

Exactly man, make he text more visible

 

I found it sort of hard to make the word out before I read the post but I have to admit this is a lot better than the last two things I saw you post! Well done, keep practicing and take the c&c people give you on board and you will soon see results.

 

thanks bro, and might take some of it also.

 

Can't read it and chill with the contrast.

 

Why everybody compain always the brighness.
I got 2 monitors and other is 40" inch full hd 1080p hdmi cabled, all full brightness. and i havent never used glasses, so why my eyes dosent catch that?

its just a simple question but just need to lower it for all others then.

thanks other ways about your comment

 

i can read it just fine but i also write graffiti so i kinda got an eye for it. also in graffiti its not so much about what it says it the piece in a whole.

 

Yah, thats true. graffiti got whole new world of art when you get the point of it.
"hobby of my 3-4 years."

 

well I still suggest he makes it more clear, its not hard to see, but it definitely doesnt stand out

 

It's very, very bright and the colours look a bit weird together.

Also there is not a lot going on in the picture.
An effect on a white picture doesn't mean it's going to look good.

 

I like the graffiti look but I do agree its a bit hard to read. Not sure I'd be able to get AVICI out of that.

 

People aren't talking about the brightness on your screen you fucking idiot. They're talking about the brightness of the piece. As much as i hate you tho the pencil work isn't too bad.

 

Nice job dude, they look amazing.

 

yeah i have noticed that you like to over sharpen and over contrast a lot.

 

next time you read hope you undestand. im telling only i got max bright settings on here. "90% people not using max settings on brighness" and ofcourse i did know that they talk about my work idiot.

thanks visiting still.

 

Not bad, but as others had said, try to make it a tad more legible.

 

if you know what they're talking about why even bring up glasses and your screen you illiterate fuck.

 

because i was high and other reasons my darling, thanks for this messege will send a report again of your language.

I dont like it because, its hurting my feelings and i cant resist my mind to make something my self. Only because of your writings.

 

Very nice, do you do work for others? Looking for someone to make me a banner for my youtube page