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Discussion in 'Graphics Gallery' started by bigk1121, May 7, 2013.

  1. bigk1121

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    Not bad, looks a little top heavy tho.

    Also you would need to be able to spell business card.
     
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    new busness card

    The top is exceptionally unprofessional. It's too cluttered, the ribbons look cheesy, and this:
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    is not centered nor symmetric, and is the only instance where your kerning is altered, which makes it look like it doesn't belong.
     
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    Your layout sucks. Too much dead space
    And as someone else said, the banners are very tacky, you're going to do them, do them well
     
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    how much is what?
     
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    Personally I think there is too much going on. Business cards are usually minimalistic due to their only being such a small space to work with. I think you should only use one banner max and you need to get shadowing, etc going with it.

    For example:
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    The shadow/texture was brushed on by a friend of mine in several layers
     
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    It's a pretty cool design but going back to fendles point, it is abit too heavy :)
     
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