new busness card

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Not bad, looks a little top heavy tho.

Also you would need to be able to spell business card.

 

The top is exceptionally unprofessional. It's too cluttered, the ribbons look cheesy, and this:

is not centered nor symmetric, and is the only instance where your kerning is altered, which makes it look like it doesn't belong.

 

Your layout sucks. Too much dead space
And as someone else said, the banners are very tacky, you're going to do them, do them well

 

how much is what?

 

Personally I think there is too much going on. Business cards are usually minimalistic due to their only being such a small space to work with. I think you should only use one banner max and you need to get shadowing, etc going with it.

For example:

The shadow/texture was brushed on by a friend of mine in several layers

 

It's a pretty cool design but going back to fendles point, it is abit too heavy