00Se7en

Discussion in 'Graphics Gallery' started by Harry, Feb 18, 2013.

00Se7en
  1. Unread #1 - Feb 18, 2013 at 5:31 PM
  2. Harry
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    00Se7en

    This is one i did for 00Se7en just for the experience hopefully he likes it, if there is any changes you want me to make let me know.
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    Give me Feedback please :)
     
  3. Unread #2 - Feb 18, 2013 at 5:36 PM
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    00Se7en

    That is a brilliant effort, one tip I do have is that you should make the letters slightly clearer, I am struggling to see the letters properly, it could just be my eyesight though!
     
  5. Unread #3 - Feb 18, 2013 at 5:49 PM
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    00Se7en

    Personally, its way too crowded. This makes the text hard to read, which becomes more of a pain when its a name like that (no offence). Other than that, your reflections seem kind of choppy, try to smoothen them out. Keep practicing!
     
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