New layout, CnC appreciated

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CnC?

 

Only downside is that people can't copy/paste your information. Otherwise it looks nice.

 

Owell, for ease of access the order form is in regular text so they can copy & paste that easily. Also I felt it wouldn't look right having it in regular text

 

Add a slight gradient to the text. It'd look a lot better.

 

Which direction & which type? I know what you mean though. I've tried to get the effects subtle but enough to be slightly noticeable. It has a very slight outer glow and a small drop shadow currently.

 

It is pretty clear and precise to read, as Dave said the only problem is the Copy/Paste thing.

 

Looks almost exactly like my old graphics thread. Its nice but add some gradients.

 

Looks similar to your old one but a lot sleeker and professional.

The only thing that's bothering me is the dullness of the text, as mentioned before try adding a gradient to the text or even layer styles, mess around with it to your liking.

 

I like it, it's better then my layout's anyhow haha!

Get teaching me man

 

Good basic design - the simplicity and such is good, but I think the logo and the body text both need work. The logo is alright, but feels really flat. Texture it up, remove the fucking inner shadow and give it some better coloring and gradients - the whole point is to make it pop out and it fails miserably. Same applies to the body text - feels flat. Add a drop shadow with 0 distance and it will improve significantly. A few other small changes can make it really good. The border is a bit iffy but ok, and the whole thing should be enlarged a bit if you have a higher-resolution file.

And please listen this time around and don't do it like you did the buttons in your sig all over again

 

Haha I did listen but I'm at MoonGlare's mercy, I decided I want like a block under the Jack but he's quite busy to do it for me.

I know what you mean though, I just have not been bothered to go back and fix it aha, might do some stuff now with it tbh

The inner shadow is for the letterpress effect, you don't think it works?
The coloring is to fit the rest of the layout and originally I had a gradient but I decided it wasn't for me. What kind of texture would you recommend? If I did use one it would be relatively subtle since I don't want it to look out of place with the rest of the layout. I also have edited the drop shadow but haven't reuploaded yet.

Trying to figure out how to get a gradient to effect only a single line of the layout, and not the whole paragraph

 

Very nice, clean and simple design. Agreeing with Moonglare's suggestion to add some gradients to make it a bit more eye-catching. Great work!

 

403 forbidden is all I'm getting.

 

Reuploaded with new and improved version 2.

 

Looks awesome.
There is one thing I don't like and that is the font.
But I might be the only one who doesn't like it :love:

 

looks nice, but I can't help but feel like the blue clashes with something (maybe sythes blue).

Other than that, I think it looks great.

 

looks nice, but I can't help but feel like the blue clashes with something (maybe sythes blue).

Other than that, I think it looks great.

 

looks nice, but I can't help but feel like the blue clashes with something (maybe sythes blue).

Other than that, I think it looks great.

 

Just a suggestion, but, I think it would look really neat if the top logo looked like it was "imprinted" into the layout. Like sunk downwards.