Okay so I made a rap

I made up a rap the other day, check this shit out and tell me what choo thank.


Yo yo yo yo yo
I finna go
get some hoes
ya know?
Bro?
I aint got no afro.
It gets in the way when I'm rollin in mah dough.
ya know?
I got three naked hoes on the flo
Do not pass go
I make a nigga go woah!
ya know?
Shiiiiiiiiiit
you finna get hit
wit dis baseball mit
wanna throw a fit?
you finna get bit
all around yo tit
im gonna tickle yo pit
that's my spit




What do ya'll thank? I'm a lyrical mother fuckin genius, I know.

 

DUDE, that shit blew my mind, that's some tupac/biggie shit son, keep spitting that game man, shit...

Gonna take a minute and just soak it in before I continue my post haha...

This part is fucking ridiculous bro. Swagga to a hundred million mayne.

 

Respect

 

You have no flow and your creativity is borderline autistic. You need to go back to the drawing board and analyze your inner self. You need to get in touch with your roots and act like yourself. Don't wear a mask or put up a front - THEN you'll make good music.

 

lol its sad what jealous people will say...keep at it you are freaking dope

 

Can't tell if serious rap or troll.

 

It flows really good if you say it fast. I'm thinking about tossing out a few more verses and a chorus. Maybe turning it into a song?

 

This says it all.

 

Don't gravedig threads, we don't need this.

 

Because I was trying to "Gravedig". Seen it like 6th thread down read it, and commented. Didn't look at the date. Sorry the section isn't active.

 

I'm just going to close this...