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Discussion in 'Music' started by Hello my name is, Mar 10, 2009.

  1. Hello my name is

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    I just might love this girl but im not sure
    The reason i dont know, is because i barely know her
    I dont normally feel like smiling its to much hassle
    But this girl breaks my shell, she knows im fragile

    but yet, im not sure if my feelings are true
    I keep my gaurd up, ive already been used
    Its to much work to fall in love
    And its to much hurt, to lose "the one"
    so right now, ill just hold her hand and be happy
    Because i dont want my feelings to come back at me
    And haunt me, and taunt me, in my fucking dreams
    Right now its just me my heart, and you on my team
    So we will do this with one last slash
    I will break my lonelyness, with cowardness attached
    I will leap from a broken bridge, to a long road
    And tell you i love you, then take you home
    Hopefully you call me tomarrow, and tell me the truth
    Not let me fall for you and make me fall in-to
    The same fucking place ive fallen before
    Im done feeling pain, No-More
     
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    I can imagine this being one of those acoustic emo-type songs ^_^
    Gj.
     
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    lol this is what i kind of just went through.
    went out with a girl, but just met her this year...
    i told her those three words, && she couldnt say it back.
    it's whatever tho' now. gotta deal with it && move on.

    oh yeah aaanyways i like this though. mostly the ending. nice rhymes uce.
     
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    Good job man, well written.

    The broken bridge and long road metaphor was very suiting.
     
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