First time with C4D

Take a look. Just slapped it together, to see what I could do.. I actually can't figure out how to render it out with the transparent background... You can tell when you see the black specks in the lettering. I've tried setting the output format as .png, and checked the alpha thing. Still no results. Help me out? Any good tuts you can suggest? Thanks in advance

 

Not bad for first time.

 

This is how your settings should look.

 

^ add the ambient occlusion effect to that too.

 

Nice for ur first time

However, im not a fan of the font (more for the E). + theres too much of effects (wave) or idk on the letters - less of that and u should be alot better with ur GFX (my opinion )

Good job bro! Continue gfx ur in a good way

 

Well looks like a humble beginning like always; also, I see you've got the transparency now. Let's see what you can do with some practice in there.

 

Honest opinion: I really dont like the text, Very "Ugly" To the eye and just isnt clear and clean. Other than that i like the color and the background that you added and i think it is a good start and hopefully you can keep it up .

 

Yall need to step back and learn the basics before you even go near C4D.

Goddamm.

 

Gravedig?

 

Nice! I would suggest to look into my signature (the site) and ask help there.

The text is okay, but can have some improving in depth and materials!

 

For a first timer thats not bad, it takes a lot to get used to using c4d, well done