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Broken Fingers No Longer Nimble

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Death Of Faith,
Never knew God has such investment power,
People aim prayers with deadly accuracy,
Cursing those who follow faithful,
Hypocrites fight for podium time,
Spreading their falsehoods and lies,
Life sucked from every pore,
Give me 10% or even more,
Stigma faked for the fame,
Lies are told and kept minds maimed,
Drop your Bibles,
Drop your gun,
Cut your wrist and bleed your blood into the holy water,
Shunned by man it all ends.
 
*thunderous applause*

Yay! A song about something! <3

I am going to break it down and tell you what I think it means.

Death Of Faith,
Never knew God has such investment power,
People aim prayers with deadly accuracy,
Cursing those who follow faithful,

I'm not sure, but I think that this referring to Christians cursing Muslims in the Middle East because they are perceived as terrorists?

Hypocrites fight for podium time,
Spreading their falsehoods and lies,
Life sucked from every pore,
Give me 10% or even more,
Stigma faked for the fame,
Lies are told and kept minds maimed,

The hypocrites are politicians and basically this is saying that the government is lying to us saying that things in the Middle East were terrible so that we will support the war.

Drop your Bibles,
Drop your gun,
Cut your wrist and bleed your blood into the holy water,
Shunned by man it all ends.

Throw away your religion. Stop the war in Iraq. Die.

Now that I read this again, I think it may be referring to the conflict in Israel because of the line "bleed your blood into holy water."

Please respond :) I really like this poem/song. It has a deep meaning I wish to find out.
 
Nice, I like your break down of it.... I have some more writings if you want to read them, add my MSN. [email protected] and what do you think of the title
 
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Death Of Faith,
Never knew God has such investment power,
People aim prayers with deadly accuracy,
Cursing those who follow faithful,
Hypocrites fight for podium time,
Spreading their falsehoods and lies,
Life sucked from every pore,
Give me 10% or even more,
Stigma faked for the fame,
Lies are told and kept minds maimed,
Drop your Bibles,
Drop your gun,
Cut your wrist and bleed your blood into the holy water,
Shunned by man it all ends.

MAKE IT INTO BEAT POETRY

very good!
just dont set it to some metal shit and scream it
 
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I liked it- do you have any more work you are willing to post here on Sythe?
 
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