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~Look to the Stars

TidyBoi

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3 versions.

V1:
LooktotheStarsOriginal.png


V2:
LooktotheStarsGradient.png


V3:
LooktotheStarsBW.png
 
good use of effects and lighting. the left almost kills it and i think it needs some text... the uhhh, im just going to say render so i dont get it wrong, is very ugly haha.
 
The left is negative space. I was trying to follow the "Rule of Thirds".

It's fine without text. My text would ruin it anyway, I'm not great with it.

Thanks for posting ^_^
 
The left is negative space. I was trying to follow the "Rule of Thirds".

It's fine without text. My text would ruin it anyway, I'm not great with it.

Thanks for posting ^_^

yeah, i take photo class, and the rule of thirds explains it should follow the lines and try to place a spot of interest on one of the 4 intersecting points etc.

it just looks trab over there, i preffer a completely exciting sig.

also, i get the whole text problem :P
 
Looks nice, maybe cut off the negative space a bit, and I think it would look cool with the background blurred a little bit, and add some more gradient maps, also work with the curves option to get the lighting to change.
 
Thank you lol. I played with the lighting with brightness/contrast layers but I'll test the curves.

I blurred slight parts of the background for depth. I blurred right hand side of her head, most of the negative space, and other little random spots.

Thanks ^_^
 
10/10 I like it very mutch.
 
I think it would be alright if the girl wasnt that ugly...

The negative space is alright, if you tone down the other side.
Also I would make the negative space on the right instead.
 
Beautiful..The girl/guy just creeps me out..I like the negative space. It brings your eye more to the render, and I love your effects. text in the negative space would of made it better, but i understand the 'not using text' theory>.< i suck at text to =p.
 
v1 looks great. I don't like the way the girl looks but the effects and colours are very nice
 
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