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- Thread starter Swaze
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Love the color scheme and lighting here. Not sure if this is a photo manipulation or a render but regardless the quality is great. The only thing I see (with my severely untrained eye) is the numbers seem out of place. The 6 and 7 on his chest are a little too bright/saturated and draw my eye away from the rest of the piece. Maybe blending or smudging them would help? Not sure, but overall this is a fantastic piece. Keep up the good work!
Thank you for your feedback.
And it's a render: http://www.officialpsds.com/images/thumbs/Tech-N9ne-4-psd80016.png
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The sweeet burn of Old. No 7
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I agree the 7 does draw the eye very easily. I really like the design though its beautiful work honestly.
will try reducing contrast on the numbers, thanks.
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not a sig, more like a photomanipulation
The text does not go along with the mens chest, needs a bit work with that.
Also try to work with the depth. The lava and flame bursts does not follow the flow. Some point up, some down, so atleast the right side needs some rotation.
You could also increase lighting on the body on the parts where the flames casts light.
There´s some feedback
The text does not go along with the mens chest, needs a bit work with that.
Also try to work with the depth. The lava and flame bursts does not follow the flow. Some point up, some down, so atleast the right side needs some rotation.
You could also increase lighting on the body on the parts where the flames casts light.
There´s some feedback
not a sig, more like a photomanipulation
The text does not go along with the mens chest, needs a bit work with that.
Also try to work with the depth. The lava and flame bursts does not follow the flow. Some point up, some down, so atleast the right side needs some rotation.
You could also increase lighting on the body on the parts where the flames casts light.
There´s some feedback
All signatures can be considered a photo manipulation.
Thank you for your feedback.
Looks sick mate, if I have to rate this I would say 8/10. That layer "7" has too much light in it aswell for the thing on the right - his left hand .
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